Google Docs - Writing 1

On Friday, some children started some writing on our NEOs. They were able to upload their writing to GoogleDocs. Lucy and Ella both then managed to then log on to GoogleDocs at home and to work on their writing some more. Here's the story that Lucy wrote. Ella's will be in the next post.

THE BIG DISASTER by Lucy

A thousand miles ago in the north east of Australia a girl called Rebbecca [ about 15 ] had a older sister called Sophie who was about to get marred in St. Marys church. It’s a week before the wedding and there in Jane’s bridal shop to get the most important thing of all the dress. Because Chloe is one Sophie's future husband Jon he is with her ,he isout side keeping Chloe occupied . Suddenly Sophie's dad heard Chloe crying desolately. Jon had disappeared.


As soon as Sophie, Rebbecca and their dad got home ,Sophie called her bridesmaids to come over. Lucy and Milly were her bridesmaids and they were also good problem solvers, they asked Sophie's dad some defining questions . Soon they found out where he might be. 

“He has probably been kidnapped “ whispered Lucy.
“There’s a old island in the middle of the sea,”said Milly  
“You could go in Jon's rowing boat “sobbed Sophie.
“But we need to be quiet,” whispered Milly.
“Milly if he is not on the island let’s look in the old dungeons,” said Lucy.
“Well you will have to row fast and hard” said Sophie with tears trickling down her little face like rain drops.


Surprisingly the rowing boat was like a 2013 speed  boat with extreme super powers.

“Ten miles to go “shouted Rebbecca.
“We can’t stop now Lucy we need to find Jon,”whispered Milly .
“ Row faster dad “
”Sophie! Shh!”

Finally they reached the island. They had the most determined look ever. When they had looked everywhere they got in a group as quickly as possible.  Suddenly they ran to the boat and started rowing .
”The old dungeons” shouted Lucy panting .
"We will never be in time he is probably hanged up by his neck “ sobbed Sophie.
“Don't worry we will be their in time” said Sophie's dad “he will be fine I'm sure “
“START ROWING THEN “shouted Sophie getting in a tantrum .


Finally they were there .Just then they heard some one shout “HELLO help me! “ It was Jon . Sophie ran up into where the noise was coming from but she lead into a trap she flew up in to mid air ,”Those cheeky pirates" whispered Sophie. All the pirates walked down the ten blocks of steps to get to the floor the chef stood out from the men .”Ar me hearties we have visitor's “”And one fell in our trap I set up” said a child  “Anyway why are you hear you are hear to get your husband back?"

“Well you wont be alive for very long” said Sophie's dad and started punching, kicking and hitting until …  he fell tothe floor. All the other pirates ran as fast as their mini legs could carry them. One hit a trap door that let Sophie go fling to the floor .Rebbecca ran over and released Jon. They sailed over to land and got the white  wedding dress. At last, Sophie, Jon, Rebeca  their dad and the whole family and the wedding dress were all together. The wedding was spectacular and they all lived happily ever after .

                                                     THE END